At least you labeled it correctly
...but as I've nit-picked in other reviews (heh), this would be better off in the "Techno" category, and I listened as far as I could and I heard no Drum N Bass breaks or anything.
Also, you did ok with the samples themselves, but if you're actually overloading with teh volume just to try to make it sound extra "awesome" or something, turn it down and just run more distortion or compression on it. A little song structure would help too, the timing of the single-sample looped breakdowns threw me off a bit.
You're aiming in the right direction but you've got a long way to go. Considering you have submissions going 2x Platinum as of this writing, perhaps you should focus on what made those productions good and apply that to the other tracks you do.